having a two week holiday, was really fun!
On the first week on the holidays, we stayed home and my friends came to our house for dinner which was really fun! We played lots of games together and thought that she could have a sleepover but she was going to have it next week. As the weeks went by, I didn't do much really on the first week but the second week was really fun! On Monday we went to the Hornby Mall and bought a cake because the my two sisters were turning 1! I got them some toys but they were scared of dolls that time. On Tuesday we went to the Westfield mall until we have to take my brother to Rugby. We got some clothes and Shoes but then since it was pretty warm, Sahil and I got ourselves some of those blue fanta things.
We forgot to look at the time and so Shukoor was late and we couldn't take him to Rugby training. The next day we stayed home but I was excited tomorrow because I got to go to my friends house and have a sleepover too! When I had a sleepover at her house, first we had to go to someones house because they got a new house. We stayed there for a really long time and by the time we went home, it was dark as it could be. When we went home we had dinner and then we made some slime which was really fun. First we made normal slime and dyed it pink, then we made foam slime and dyed it both green. She also had a pastel pink colour which was really cool. My favourite slime was the normal slime because the foam slime, the little balls would go everywhere which is really annoying for me and her. After that we decided to do our nails but it took a really long time because we did our nails white but we had to do lot's of coats to make it actual white. I was getting really tired so we went to sleep, When we woke up we had breakfast and we did lots of challenges after because we didn't know what to do. We did the what's in my mouth challenge's which was fun! After a couple of hours we had to get ready because I was gonna go home which was sad. Tomorrow on Saturday, we went to the mall and we each had our own money that we could buy anything which was really fun. We let the babies play in the kids area for a while and watching them play was really funny! We spent the day like that and the next day I had farsi school that was on every Sundays, We went walking to the park after breakfast, we took the babies too with their shoes on and they walked so much when we got there! One of my sisters Roya walked on the grass a lot and my other sister Parisa didn't go on the grass. It was nearly 2 oclock which was when it started and if we went it would have taken a really long time and we would be late so we didn't even go! I spent the day playing with my sisters and doing some reading too because tomorrow SCHOOL STARTED! YAY!
And that was my Holiday, hope you enjoy!
Hi Parwin
ReplyDeleteCool story. You did a great job at writing this. But I did see a grammar error, it was when you were talking about your two sisters.
Great Job
Khali
Yr 6
Drummond Primary School
Thank you Khali for your feedback and I will use your feedback next time, thank you!
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