It is me Parwin, I think you were right about the sea sailing thing. Cause it is pretty scary but when it is night, the stars look beautiful! For food, I have to eat fish and there is ALOT of them here since I am at sea. I hope to see so soon!
Kind Regards,
Parwin
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Right, when you read the tittle what do you think of?
And what about the letter?
This is a activity that I have done for the summer learning journey which is something that you do during the holidays but there is a certain amount of time that you have.
The activity was that you had to write a letter to someone and imagine that you are in a waka going over sea's. This is my letter as you can see and it is to my wonderful friend, Jedi!
Kia Ora Parwin,
ReplyDeleteI like that you and Jedi have written your letters to each other; what a cool way to share your learning. I think that the stars would look beautiful form the waka; you would be able to see them very clearly because there wouldn't be any light pollution.
When I read your title, it made me think that the person was saying goodbye to someone, but they weren't really sure if it was goodbye or not - maybe they would see them again in the future.
How would you feel about only having fish to eat? I don't think that I would enjoy that very much.
I look forward to reading your other posts soon.
Hazel :)
Hey there Parwin,
ReplyDeleteIt's great to read more of your blog posts! How was your first week of January 2018? I still can't believe 2017 is over!
I enjoyed reading your letter to your friend Jedi and you made it really personal by adding in your feelings 'pretty scary' and 'beautiful'. Descriptive words can make your writing more interesting to read! You could try adding in some more details like describing colours, smell, what things look like, the weather...etc.
I like how you mentioned that this is a Summer Learning Journey activity. I hope more of your friends would join in and become an active blogger like you.
I look forward to reading more of your posts.
All the best,
Jade C.