I love the dancing potatoes. I would have loved to know more about 'why' things are your favourite. I find that if you include the word ' because' in a the sentence then you cannot help but explain 'why' something is important. I know you have fascinating ideas and I cannot wait to read more about them. In the meantime; Why do you like dancing potatoes?
Hi Parwin my name is Chloe I am from wigram primary school I like your all about me slide show it was very interesting and funny from the dancing potatoes maybe next time could you make the writing a bit clear too see
Hi Parwin my name is josephine from tamaki primary but i'm a year 7 I like that ur afghanistan I would like to know if u could upload a photo into things about me
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I love the dancing potatoes. I would have loved to know more about 'why' things are your favourite. I find that if you include the word ' because' in a the sentence then you cannot help but explain 'why' something is important. I know you have fascinating ideas and I cannot wait to read more about them. In the meantime; Why do you like dancing potatoes?
ReplyDeleteHi Parwin my name is Chloe I am from wigram primary school I like your all about me slide show it was very interesting and funny from the dancing potatoes maybe next time could you make the writing a bit clear too see
ReplyDeleteBy Chloe :)
Hi Parwin my name is josephine from tamaki primary but i'm a year 7 I like that ur afghanistan I would like to know if u could upload a photo into things about me
ReplyDeleteSincerely Josephine