What Does Darth Vader Do On His Day Off?

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Today I am going to be sharing my long write that I did on Tuesday. If you didn't know, we always have a long write on Tuesdays and usually the teachers have 2 topics which we pick and write about that. But we have to reach the word count and fill the success criteria too. We have 40 minutes to do this.

For this week, we had something a bit different because the topic for this week was to write a diary entry pretending to be Darth Vader. At first, I found this a bit challenging because, lets be honest, I'm not really a Star Wars person so I didn't know much about him but I just let my imagination run free and just write what comes to my mind.

I think that over all I did a pretty good job because I have written in 1st person and I think that I detailed everything very clearly but maybe next time I could maybe add some more similes and things to make my writing even better.

Here is my work, I hope you enjoy! I would also like some feedback on what I could do to improve my writing. Until next time, goodbye! Challenge: What do you think Darth Vader does on his day off? Try doing something like I did!

Some people think that when Villains are bad. Like all the time. But that isn’t true and it hurts my feelings when people think that I am always bad. 24/7. But they only say that because of what I do when I am on screen like when you are watching me. But did I pick to be bad? Did I have a choice. No. They needed a bad guy and I had trouble breathing which was a great thing for them so they made me the villian. Of course, I wouldn’t do these things in real life. Okay, maybe I would but just not as evil. 

BANG, BANG, BANG! That was the sound of how I was woken up .It was the sound of the noisy storm trooper. As usual, he didn’t know what to do and was now breaking the system so I had to get up and help him. It was about 7:30 in the morning when this happened. I usually wake up at 9. But thanks to the stormtrooper. Agh. So annoying. But I don’t always wake up at 9. That's when I have a day off like today. Where as on other days, I have a pretty tight schedule. (Light shining down on him. Lots of microphones in front of him. Dramatic music. In a dramatic voice.) But today was different. Today was the day that I was going to have my day off. Today was the day that I would relax. Today was the day… 
BANG, BANG, BANG. That was the storm trooper again except it was a different one who was just as dumb as the others. Had to help him too. 

I decided that I was going to be going and have some breakfast. But lucky me, there wasn’t any  Coffee left. (Very angry at this stage.) You may think that I am just overreacting but I am not. Because I have coffee every day. Every single day. But today, when I have my day off, they ain’t no coffee left for me. Seriously?! By now, I was very angry. Actually to be precise, very, very, very (Lots of very) angry. 
I wanted to get my lightsaber and just cut everything in my way. But I hadn’t bought that with me so I used the force to mess everything up. Now, my job there was done, I decided that I would go and a nice warm bath. But that was hard since we were in space and there was no gravity. But somehow, they have made that happen so I could take a comfy, cozy bath. It was just what I needed after what had happened.

I glide through the hallways and then I get myself a towel and walk towards the bath. I open the door and see a stormtrooper in the shower who was now trying to cover themselves. My day was bad enough, but this made it worse. Because the stormtroopers were not even aloud to be in my room. Or in my private spots like my bath having a bath. I turn around and close my eyes and the stormtrooper gets a bathrobe. Actually MY bathrobe and runs out. That’s when I thought to myself, this day could not get any worse but I was wrong because I didn’t know what was going to happen to me. 

I change my clothes and jump into the bath. I then turned the tap on. But nothing happened. I tried again. Still nothing happened. So I used the force but I used it a bit too much because now the whole tap came off and huge wave of cold water splashed on me giving me such a shock to make me bang my head on the bath. Rubbing my poor head, I then tried to stop the water but nothing happened. So I just shoved something to stop the water from leaking again and turned the whole bathroom into a swimming pool. I tried to get out but I then managed to slip but luckily, I held on to the towel rack and saved myself from having very bad brain injuries.