Trip to the A&P show presentation.

I came to school wearing mufti, bt only my class, and why exactly? Because my class was going to the A&P Show! YASS!

But even better news because I was going to go with Lauren and Jedi!  So my day went like this…

First  what we did was we hopped into the car and then we started to drive to the show. The first thing we got was candy floss which was as delicious as candy. I didn’t finish mine because I thought I would get sick, so I gave it to Jedi cause she is just as crazy about candy floss as Lauren. We walked around eating candy floss and  looking at the rides. There was a funny magicoin and I think he was a bit worried because he looked nervous. After a couple of minutes of looking around, it was almost lunchtime so all of us got hot chips for lunch! YUMMY!  But  it  was hot like a oven so I burnt my tongue!  OUCH!  

After Lunch we watched the horse riding for a bit and got some candy. The store that we went to had a huge lollipop which was probably Jedi, Lauren, and  my head combined together but even bigger. It was like a huge colourful monster that wanted to go in your stomach to eat you…

Just Joking! Anyway, we looked at the animals like sheep, chickens, roosters, cows, rabbits, and way more! I even touched a rabbit  was so fluffy like a furball!

We watched the sheep shearing competition and then we looked around the shetlands area so we could find out if Chloe was there. We looked around so much that it was time to go back to SCHOOL!

So that was my day to the A&P Show 2017!

The week after the A&P show happened, our teachers decided set something up and that something was 8 tasks that we had to do. But what was the topic? A&P show! I only did 5 activities because I was working hard to make it vibrant and creative rather than just stick something on. I mostly draw most of my stuff or printed them. Here is a photo of what the tasks looked like!

These are the activities that I have done and finished!

Hope you liked my presentation and could I get feedback please?

Bozac Chini story from Afghanistan🇦🇫

      
In class, for inquiry, we had to pick  country and study some things about it. I picked Afghanistan and one of the things that you had to do was re-tell a well known story and this is one that I know, hope you enjoy!

The ocean maker?🌊

Yesterday, Our teacher told us that we are going to practise writing a narrative. But first we need a topic so my teacher Mrs.S found a video and showed us but only to half way when she saw the cloud and then we had to make the rest up. After we watched the movie, we wrote what we saw and how we felt on the board as a class so that it could help us with our story. Once we finished writing our idea's, we got a planning sheet and wrote our plan for the story but we had only ten minutes. After writing our plan, we started to get our plan into action! Here is my story, hope you enjoy! 
Also I need some feedback on how to improve my narrative, can you give me Feedback? 

   

The Rainmaker

Imagine yourself, on a desert and once used to be sea. If I had to describe it, I would say as hot as a oven. Anyway, there I was, flying a small plane in search for any rain clouds. I has been ages I have been looking for rain clouds but there weren't any. Everyday I would get up early and fly around hopping there would be a cloud somewhere. Life used to be easy when the sea was there and I had my home, but what happened was that a war happened and killed my father. His last words were “Save your family and tell them how much I love them, goodbye…” And with that he died. I was determined to listen to my father's order’s. Before the war, I would always play in the sea with my little brother John, and my dad would sometimes go fishing and take me with him, but not anymore. Once he got a fish just as big as my little brother john.

Minutes passed as looked around in my plane not knowing what to do, I was about to lose hope and go back when something shined in my eye. I looked around and that was when I saw that it was the light house. It was shining towards the mountains in front of me and that was when I saw a cloud. I was running out of petrol but I had to go near the cloud because I had invented something called the rainmaker and it’s hard to explain how it is made.

Momentarily, I put the gear on full speed and went closer to the cloud but I was almost there when I started to go crashing down to the ground. My plane got damaged and so did I. I couldn’t contact anyone since I didn’t have anything on me. I decided that I would try and climb the mountain since I was surrounded by it. I started to climb it. I wasn’t even halfway when suddenly I went falling into the ground! “AHHHHHHHHHHH!!!” I yelled. But nobody could hear me. I kept going down until I landed in the water.

Following that, swam up and that was when I saw a cave full of water. I felt so happy to find water but how was I supposed to get out? I got out of the water and looked around for any holes leading outside but I couldn’t find any. It was pretty dark so I couldn't see much. I felt around the walls when I felt a leaver. I pull the ever down, and a huge hole was made. I was confused and thought who could have made this.

Meanwhile, I saw a dim light so I went near it and when I saw tumbleweed, I knew this was the way out. I went out and so my village. I ran to my village and told everybody what happened. Everybody got big buckets and some kids even tooks their shirts off because they wanted to swim.

During that time, I was so happy to see my village laughing since it was a long time I saw them laugh but at that moment, in the middle of the lake, there was a swirling pool...