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A teenage boy left his home, without telling his parents
or taking his phone!
or taking his phone!
A Teenage boy with cancer has escaped The Parents of Mark have been
his house and his friend says “Mark only very worried and so has his best
escaped his house to do what he always friend Jesse who says “Across far
wanted to do, Climb Mount Rainier.” The dark miles, a friend can still hold
teenage boy is by the name of Mark and your hand and be there with you,
the police have been looking for Mark and but now I can’t.” The boy still hasn’t
the only way to get out of the town is by been found yet and Jesse hasn’t
train so the police have been to the train gone to school since he was lost or
station but haven't found any clues. The gone home because Jesse wanted
boy was found missing on the 21 of May to stay with Marks parents until
and their parents say that Mark took his Mark comes back. The police are
dog with himself too because his dog at Mount Rainier and are keeping
wasn’t at home and never leaves to go an eye out if they see Mark but they
anywhere. Still haven't found him.
The police have been called recently Police are still looking for mark
and said that they saw a boy with a and if you see him then please
dog heading to Washington DC but report to the police because
it seemed like a kid trying to make everybody is worried about Mark
his voice like a grown ups so the who is a strong boy with cancer but
police have immediately went to still has faith in him.
but still has faith in himself.
but still has faith in himself.
where the phone call had come
from and went to investigate it.
The phone call had come from
a shop and the owners say that
they saw a bruised and hurt
boy along with his dog, they
say that when they wanted to
call the police the boy said
no and started panicking so
they let the boy call someone.
After that the oy left the shop
and they say that they don’t
know where he went or how
he got hurt.
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Want to be an editor? Be like me!
A lot of people want to be a I had sent my first story to
newspaper editor but they the newspaper makers and
need to learn how to do it they said that they liked it,
perfectly. In this part of the but they had changed some
newspaper, I will be writing things but it was still fine and
how it is editing and writing I liked it. I started sending
a newspaper. But here is a stories for the newspapers
little bit about me. My first and comments for what they
job was at the checkout at could improve on and since I
Paknsave but I had a passion kept doing it, they hired me as
for writing stories. I started an editor because they thought
editing newspapers in 1998 that my improvements that I gave
and have still done it until to them were really helpful.
now and I have written some
newspaper stories too. Here Something challenging was
is how I have settled in with changing the words because
being an editor. some of them used words that
weren’t interesting and were
just plain words so I had to find
perfect words that would suit
that. I had to work most of the
time and it was really stressing for
my brain but since I kept doing
that my brain has gotten used
to it and at first it was pretty
challenging but now I find it
very easy.
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Hey Bloggers! I'm back! Anway, in my class, we have been writing newspapers which is something new for me because I don't write newspapers and I didn't how to write newspapers but now I do thanks to our wonderful teachers! We had to write our newspapers o this site but mine wouldn't let me type so I had to do mine on a google doc which was pretty challenging and took a long time but it turned out great. To be successful at writing newspapers then you must have these things in it...
- Headline must have pun, rhyme or alliteration
- Have an intro that has the 5 w's
- In sections or paragraphs
- Past tense
- 3rd person
- Includes a quote
- Used speech marks around the quote
- Ends with a conclusion
I would love for feedback on what I could improve on next time and if you have any questions then please ask!
