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Thursday, March 14, 2019

Teaser of my story!

Hey bloggers, I'm back and today I will be showing you a bit of my, oh wait, I meant our story. I said our because Jedi is helping as well. Jedi is my best friend who is in my class. I started the story a long time ago but then I was looking through my drive and saw that I had lots of stories that haven't been finished. I decided that I would do open of the ones that I had almost finished and Jedi could finish the story that I started since she was already in both of the stories. Here is the starting of the story and and I hope you like it! If you have any questions then please ask and if you have any idea then that would be helpful because I am sort of running out of ideas!
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My legs were shaky and I arm was bleeding. The blood made a big stain on the sleeves of my shirt. It was dark now, very dark and I couldn’t see much but weak lights in the distance. I tried to go closer to the lights and see what it is but my body was trembling and my arm was hurting more than ever. My eyelids were getting heavier and heavier by the second and I couldn’t hold them open anymore, I didn’t have the strength in my body to keep them open and keep walking anymore…

I woke up seeing lights above my head but where was I? I could hear people's voices very loud but everything was blurry. I couldn’t see anything but blobs of colors moving around. I tried to concentrate more and that was when I saw that I was in a hospital. But who brought me here and why did they bring me there? One of the doctors saw that I had woken up and came closer and asked me some questions. I replied to all of them but the question I was thinking about was racing around my head getting louder.  “Who brought me here, I want to see that person, I have to know who brought me here…” I asked trying to get but the doctor didn’t let me get up. “I don’t know the name of the person who brought you here but it was wearing a dark black cloak and I saw that he had…” “Brown hair?” I asked eagerly waiting for him to respond but he didn’t. “I didn’t see his hair but how did you get the big cut on your arm, you have lost a lot of blood.” “Well, I was running away from someone who was trying to kill me but I don’t know why?”

I had to go and run away from the hospital too but the doctors didn’t let me go and said that I might faint again. I have to until tomorrow and then I must go. They must be looking for me.  I can’t stop my mission now, I have to find my sister, my twin. I lost her when I was younger and I have been looking for her and I still haven't found her. But I won’t stop until I find her, I have to. It was the next day when the doctors said that I could leave the hospital, which was good news.  I was going out of my room when I heard a familiar voice, I peeked through the door and saw that it was the same person that tried to kill me. How did they find me here? Oh no! What am I supposed to do? Seriously, they even have to talk to the same doctor like mine. I have to go but how? I will go through the window, I leaped through the window just a few seconds before the guard opened the door along with the doctor.

I spent the whole day walking, the sun glared at me. Then from beneath the bushes came a low crackling noise. I went to check what it was and out of nowhere came my two friends which were named Jedi and Chloe, that I met while I was running away…

2 comments:

  1. Amazing post although i did see a writing error which you could fix other than that good job. Keep it up.

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    1. Hey Nathan, thank you for commenting my blog! I probably didn't see the writing error but thanks, also when you are writing, you write 'I' not 'i' but thanks for commenting on my blog!

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