Hey bloggers, I'm back!
Today is the 6th day of not only the Spring Learning Journey but also the holidays! Now, if you haven't been checking my blog out lately then I will explain what the Spring Learning Journey is. It's a thing where we do activities comment on others blogs as well as earn points. But what this does is it sort of helps us remember everything that we learnt and not forget the things that we learnt.
There will be 3 winners, 1st, 2nd and 3rd. But not only that, if you do 6 activities or more, then you will still get a small prize as well.
Now, for today, I am going to be blogging about activity number 14! This is where we have to comment on 3 other students blogs. I have chosen the 3 students that I first commented on which were Alan, Renae and Grace. Be sure to check their blogs out.
I cant take a screenshot on this computer so I'm just going to copy and paste the comments that I've written. Here they are, I hope you enjoy, If you have any questions then please ask! Otherwise, until next time, goodbye!
Alan
Hey Alan, its me Parwin, I see that you are also doing the Spring Learning Journey like me, challenge is on!
I'm looking at the list and Most of these things I haven't tried, I have only tried Blueberry and I think that is it. For me, Buddha's Hand sounds very interesting so I might do some Buddha's Hand so I am going to some research about that as well!
Seems like we have a lot in common because I have never tried any of those things except the blueberries which I think I have only tried once or twice but no more than that. It has been so long that I don't even remember how it tastes like!
I think that to improve, you could maybe present your work in a more exciting way like maybe adding some pictures of what some of them look like or maybe just using a website to present it to make it even better.
Awesome work!
Looking forward to your next posts,
Parwin
I'm looking at the list and Most of these things I haven't tried, I have only tried Blueberry and I think that is it. For me, Buddha's Hand sounds very interesting so I might do some Buddha's Hand so I am going to some research about that as well!
Seems like we have a lot in common because I have never tried any of those things except the blueberries which I think I have only tried once or twice but no more than that. It has been so long that I don't even remember how it tastes like!
I think that to improve, you could maybe present your work in a more exciting way like maybe adding some pictures of what some of them look like or maybe just using a website to present it to make it even better.
Awesome work!
Looking forward to your next posts,
Parwin
Renae
Hey Renae, its me Parwin. I see you are doing the Spring Learning Journey like me, the challenge is on!
I really liked the list of healthy foods that you haven't tried because you have added lots of colour and most of them sort of shocked me because I always eat tomatoes, capsicums, eggplant and cucumber! Cucumber is like the best thing ever and you haven't tried it! Just kidding but it is really nice and I recommend you try it. Trust me, it delicious!
While reading your blog post, this sort of reminds me of when I first tried mushroom on Pizza and I didn't even realize that it had any mushrooms because it honestly did not taste like anything at all!
I think to improve, you should just go through your blog post and proof read because you have some errors and mistakes in there but other than that, great job!
Awesome work!
Looking forward to your next posts,
Parwin
I really liked the list of healthy foods that you haven't tried because you have added lots of colour and most of them sort of shocked me because I always eat tomatoes, capsicums, eggplant and cucumber! Cucumber is like the best thing ever and you haven't tried it! Just kidding but it is really nice and I recommend you try it. Trust me, it delicious!
While reading your blog post, this sort of reminds me of when I first tried mushroom on Pizza and I didn't even realize that it had any mushrooms because it honestly did not taste like anything at all!
I think to improve, you should just go through your blog post and proof read because you have some errors and mistakes in there but other than that, great job!
Awesome work!
Looking forward to your next posts,
Parwin
Grace
Hey Grace, it's me Parwin! I see you are also doing the Spring Learning Journey, the challenge is on!
I really liked your slide show and your blog post because you included a lot of information and I too agree with you that most of those sound weird and posh for some reason. I have never tried any of those foods before so I am like you!
I have seen some of the those foods and but I have never tried any of those, although I do want to try some of them. Today, I saw Kohlrabi but it was the purple colour one. It looked like someone cut it to make it turn into a Rose or something.
I think that you did a great job and I don't think there is something you can improve on but if you have anything in mind, then improve that!
Awesome work!
Looking forward to your next posts,
Parwin
I really liked your slide show and your blog post because you included a lot of information and I too agree with you that most of those sound weird and posh for some reason. I have never tried any of those foods before so I am like you!
I have seen some of the those foods and but I have never tried any of those, although I do want to try some of them. Today, I saw Kohlrabi but it was the purple colour one. It looked like someone cut it to make it turn into a Rose or something.
I think that you did a great job and I don't think there is something you can improve on but if you have anything in mind, then improve that!
Awesome work!
Looking forward to your next posts,
Parwin
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