I have a secret, I am a Private Investigator

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For this week, most of the year n7 and 8's have gone on Camp but I haven't along with some other year 7 and 8's. This week, we have something different. Each day, we pick a different career or job and then during reading time, we do the activities for that thing. For Maths we find out how much money they make ina  year, month, week and so on. When it is writing, we have to write like a day in the life of the job that we have picked. Today, I am a P.I which is a Private Investigator. 

I am going to be sharing what I wrote for today because I think that I did a great job with my writing. My writing also got shared with the class and they wanted to know what would happen at the end because I could of left like a cliffhanger. 

We had 30 minutes to write our day in a life!

What do you think? Did you like my writing? Is there something I could improve on?

Here is my writing, I hope you enjoy! If you have any questions then please ask! Otherwise, until next time, goodbye!

My writing!

My alarm was glaring at me. It was 6:00am. I got out of bed and had a shower. I quickly got out and did some stretches before having some breakfast. I grabbed a bar on my way and drove to work. By the time I had done everything and got to work at 6:50. There was no time to muck around, there was a life on the line. A couple of days ago, a girl named Holly Dawson who is 16  was reported lost. She was walking home from her friends party and then she never came home. Her parents however, thought that she was staying at their house so they didn’t think of it but when she didn’t come the next day, they were scared. They called Grace’s parents to check if Holly was but they said she had left the party earlier than when it ended. They immediately reported to the police and then here I am, trying to find clues. 

The strange thing, however, was the fact that they lived in a quiet and safe neighborhood so it was pretty shocking to have someone get kidnapped. I spent the whole day yesterday trying to find clues and checking the camera’s to try and gather evidence and find out what happened. An hour past but still nothing. It around 9:00 am,  I finally stumbled across something. I found the security footage of a girl, who looked like Holly, walking down the street and then a car just slowly coming out of nowhere. I already knew what was going to happen next. She got very scared and tries to act natural. She started to walk faster and when the car went another way, she started to walk even faster. Next minute, she looked behind her and saw a figure in dark clothes lurking through the shadows. By the look on her face, you could tell that panic had risen inside her as she got her phone out. She started to type but then the figure came from behind and grabbed her pulling a bag over her head. She then gets pulled and the same car comes and they attempt to put the girl in the boot. The girl kept moving around to try and release herself but then one of them hit her in the back of the head with a bat and she immediately dozed off. 

he figure who had hit her in the head, dropped the bat in one of the bins and they drove off. That was a clue which I must get immediately. I tell one of other workers that I had found something that can lead to the kidnapping of Holly. After I said that, I ran out of the station and drove to where Holly’s friends house was. I also had to interview Holly’s friend, Grace.

The drive wasn’t too long and when I got there, I wore gloves and looked around for anything else. I then Got the Bat and put it in a bag. There was some blood on it which would have been Holly’s and maybe it would have their fingerprints too. I took the gloves off and then went towards Graces house. I then explained that I needed to ask some questions about what happened. Turns out, she and Holly had a big argument over something at school and then she stormed off. Grace then said that she had not heard of her or receive any texts. I noted every single thing down and thanked them for their time. As I was walking towards my car, I saw a phone glistening in the sun. It was slightly cracked, I put another pair of gloves on and turned the phone on, it had a photo of Holly as the background and it also had a password too. 

I drove to Holly’s parents house and asked if they knew what Holly’s password was. They did. Thank god. They asked what happened but I was not allowed to explain to them what happened. I explained to them that if we find anything then we will report it to them. I drove back to the station and it was around 12. I got there and told the chief what I had found. The chief came and watched the security footage and I gave the Bat to a Forensic DNA specialist that we had. Once the chief watched the video, we both examined through the phone. We went on her social media accounts to see if anything was Off. We then went on her messages and turns out, there was a message that was sent from an unknown number. It had a profile picture of a dark figure. The same one that was caught on the footage. I read the message and it said some pretty scary things. Then a message popped up that was just sent at that time. It just said Help. It was probably from Holly. 

My eyes opened wide and I immediately knew what was meant to happen. I rushed towards one of the other investigators and explained to them that they needed to quickly track where that number was. After some time, she found the exact place. I was expecting it to be at some type of Abandoned Warehouse, but it was somewhere just out of Christchurch. It was in the middle of nowhere, in a forest. The chief immediately got some of the police to drive there but to keep low profile. I rushed to my car and drove to where the address was. 

It was 1:30 pm when we had reached our destination. The police knew what to do and they went outside while I stayed in the car. While I was in the car, I got a call from one of the Forensic DNA specialist which I had given the bat to and said that they had found some fingerprints on them. They then sent a document of the person’s fingerprint. My mouth was gaping open. It was Kevin Dawson. Her uncle. But why would he do that? Just then, I heard a scream and then a gunshot The scream was like a females scream. I eyes opened even bigger. As much as I wanted to go outside to see what was going on, I couldn’t, I wasn’t allowed to. In a couple of minutes, I saw the police coming out with a Holly and a man in handcuffs. Although not all of the police were there. I jumped out and rushed towards them and asked what had happened. Turns out that the man in the handcuffs, was only the one who had driven the car. He claims that he had been forced but we didn’t know if he was telling the truth. The real criminal, had driven off when he saw the police. Holly was found tied to a chair in a small rundowned hut. She said that her head was aching.

I told the police what I had found out while they were gone. I asked Holly again just to make sure but she said that she never saw the faces of them. But his voice was very similar to her uncles. But the questions was, why did he do it in the first place?