Hi it's me Parwin again and in class we were supposed to pick a photo and right about it, I picked a really scary one with an old lady in it. We were supposed to add Alliteration (three words that mean the same), Simile (sentence that has the words like or as) Metaphor (sentence that has the word was or as), and Personification (is when you compare a nonliving thing to a living thing.
I strolled through the streets as I saw a lady as creepy as a mummy that’s been sitting there for a thousand years without getting wrapped! I tried not to look at her deep evil fiery eyes but every time I looked at her, she was as still as a stone but was as old as a carrot. Her hair as mouldy as spaghetti that’s been sitting there for 2 weeks and as slimy like a snail. The bright moon shone on me as I scootered home but in just a flash of lightning the old lady had VANISHED! Just as I thought of her, I could imagine her CHEWING CLEAN CHILDREN and once they went inside her stomach, it would be a CREEPY, CHILLED, CRUMBLED place full of other nasty things.
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