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Monday, May 11, 2015

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BAD WEATHER
It was stormy out side and was very cold like i was at the north pole.
lighting was banging so loud like drums banging out side my window.
It was so cold and freezing out side because it was snowing like big stones falling from the sky.
It was raining and was a very bad because we were sinking.
The cats were raining outside like their is a fire and they are panicking.
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4 comments:

  1. Mrs SpraggMay 11, 2015 at 8:41 PM

    What a great lot of imagery you have used Parwin. I am impressed with your first 5 sentence challenge!

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  2. Allan RobertsonMay 12, 2015 at 8:27 PM

    Hi Parwin. Great to see you blogging. This is superb writing. 'Outside' is a compound word - I know you would want to know. Nothing worse than panicking cats.

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  3. AnonymousSeptember 18, 2015 at 10:27 AM

    ha ha ha...That is really funny

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  4. AnonymousSeptember 18, 2015 at 10:27 AM

    ha ha ha...That is really funny

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