This week we had to make a simile poem and it had I am as big or other things on it but then we had to make our own poem and here is mine! Hope you enjoy my poem!
I am as tall as a tree
Quick as a snail
Slow as a cheetah
Small as an elephant
Large as apple
Happy as a happy child can be
Sad as a person getting hurt
Nice as a teacher (by the name of Mr.M)
Mean as a dolphin
Cold as a polar bear
Hot as a fireball
Weak as a tortoise
Strong as a gorilla
Loud as a lion
Quiet as a mouse
Tough as a tiger
Gentle as a kitten
Brave as a knight
Shy as a panda
Tame as a puppy
Wild as a wolf
Lazy as a koala
Busy as a bee
Put it all together and you’ve got Parwin
'Small as an elephant' and 'Large as an apple' are interesting similes. Plus 'Tame as a puppy.' You have described yourself with a wonderfully imaginative set of characteristics. Do you think you may have even more attributes to your personality than you have described?
ReplyDeleteI look forward to your next blog post.
hi parwin I really like how you did some opposite ones next time maybe add some juciy wourds
ReplyDeletehi parwin I really like how you did some opposite ones next time maybe add some juciy wourds
ReplyDeleteHi Parwin
ReplyDeleteI think your poem is funny and exciting, by funny I mean "small as an elephant, and large as an apple" that's what I mean by funny and exciting. How you closed the poem really suited the story as well. In conclusion I think that your poem was really intriguing, and there is nothing that I can say that you could do next time, because it was tip top work! I can't wait for another one of your poems.
Hi Parwin! I really liked your simile poem and the reason why I liked it is because you did the opposite on some of them. Maybe next time you could use more juicy words because some of the words were not that juicy to me like when it said as small as an elephant but if I were you I would say as trivial as an elephant. But otherwise I really enjoyed your poem! If you want to see my blog then type this up on google....
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This was an activity that we had to do but otherwise I would not do a comment to myself because we had to edit a comment and make it better.