Best day of my life!

Hey there bloggers!
This is a recount that we wrote based on a movie that we saw that was called Taking Flight.
During this time I have been learning about what you need to make your recount interesting and to get the readers attention and how to write a recount. I found it difficult to add all the things that a recount needs because I keep forgetting. Before we did recounts, my other recounts were pretty boring and didn't really catch the readers attention, and I think that I have improved by catching the readers attention. I would like your feedback and comments about what I can change next time! Hope you enjoy!