Hey bloggers, I'm back!
Today my blog post is for my Home Learning Activity which we have to once a week and publish it onto out blog. This week I did an uncle spy story where we receive a letter from our long lost uncle who is a spy. It said to present this in a cool way and specifically to use book creator but since I am doing this at home, I don't know the code so I just did it on Canva. I have turned this into a short story. I hope you enjoy the story! I would like your feedback on my story and what you think about it! If you have any questions then please ask, until next time, goodbye!
Hi Parwin
ReplyDeleteMy name is Marlin and I go to Grey Main School.
I just wanted to say I really liked your story and how you left it as a cliff hanger.
Next time you should make it a little easier to read like put it in a different font.
I would like to know if your making/made the other half of the story I would love to read it.
Marlin
Hey Marlin, thank you for commenting on my blog!
DeleteI actually left it as a cliffhanger because I couldn't really think of what else to write! When I have time, I will edit the font and make it easier to read. I haven't thought of writing the story but maybe I will, thanks for commenting!