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Wednesday, November 13, 2019

Bridge To Terabithia


Hey bloggers, I'm back!
Today I am going to be sharing with you a long write that I wrote yesterday, which was Tuesday. If you don't know, every Tuesday we have a long write and after a week or a couple of weeks, we have a different writing unit. For this week, we had a sheet with some pictures on it. There were 3 mythical creatures, a boy named Jess but we couldn't see the face and a girl named Leslie which we couldn't see the face of either. There were also a pair of shoes, a house and a bridge.


We had to to come up with a story and we didn't realize that it was the main things from Bridge To Terabithia until it almost came to an end. Some of the kids had realized it and were very eager and then when I thought about it more, I also realized it as well. 


We watched 10 minutes of the movie and I had seen the whole movie a couple of times so I already knew what was going to happen but we were asked to carry on and it had to be like a diary entry. 

Here is mine, I hope you enjoy! If you have any questions then please ask! Otherwise, until next time, goodbye! 

MY WRITING!

Dear diary, today might be the worst day ever! Nope, this is the worst day ever. It all started when I woke up as usual and did my morning chores as usual. Next I went for a long run, which was very nice, although I got very sweaty. Chirping from every side, the birds flew over me and ducked in the trees only to repair again but somewhere else. I could hear the water stream get louder and louder as I got closer. I ran a lot so I decided to have a sit down and admire the beautiful scenery. It never failed to make me feel calm. I could see colourful fish swimming about's with their shiny scales of armor gleaming in the sun. I jumped up, did some warm ups and made my way back to the house. I was so puffed and hungry when I got there that I just went straight to the table and had some breakfast. The juice was delicious but everyone was arguing and complaining about how I smelt. I quickly had my food and then I rushed upstairs and got cleaned up. 

After I had cleaned up, things went bad. My mother had thrown on shoes out! Although my shoes were worn out, I didn’t have other shoes but they told me to wear girl sneakers. Seriously! I got so mad but I didn’t say anything. That's when Dad came and then he also said that it was fine and that I should just wear those shoes. Out of all the colour PINK! You could tell they were girl shoes. I was not going to go to school like that, but an idea had struck me like a lightning bolt. I would just colour the pink parts with a black marker. Although I had to do more than half of it. Sometimes, I call myself a genius and although I felt good about this, I knew that someone would see my shoes and make fun of me. Especially the school bully. 

After that, I had to fix the pipes and all of the water squirted on me like watering hose, not only wetting my face but also wetting my clothes as well, wait a go! I didn’t think that things could get any worse but it was possible. I then heard the annoying honk of the school bus coming along with the sound of the bus driving and the kids shouting loudly. I quickly run and then the school bully, Janice kept calling me farm boy or something which made me heated but made everyone else laugh. I slumped in a seat and that was when my annoying little sister came and sat next to me asking what my teaches name was. Her name was Mrs Myer’s, but everyone calls her Monster Myer's, including myself. The reason why was because, well she wasn’t really one of those teachers who were nice. In fact, I don’t even think that the other teachers or principal liked her. 

After a long and boring bus drive, we had reached the school. I walked to my school taking my time because I was in no rush and didn’t care at all about being late. If I  had the choice, I wouldn’t even go to Miss Myer’s class at all. Maybe I could Fire her or something. Okay maybe not. The bell rings just as I walk through the class. Most of the kids were already sat down but the one’s who hadn’t ran and sat in their seats before Monster Myer’s came. Having to listen to her blabber on about things I didn’t care about wasn’t boring enough but having to deal with 2 knuckleheads, Lincoln and Aiden was even worse. Lincoln was sitting next to me and Aiden was behind. He had seen my shoes and was making fun of it. Who was he to make fun of my shoes like that? All he was, is a big bag of dirt. 
She was teaching history but honestly what is the point of learning about people who are already dead? 

That was when the principal came in with a new student, her name was Leslie and she had brought a lot of books. Which she probably didn’t even need. It was almost break time  and she told us that for our homework, we had to write a one page essay but something that we like. Isn’t that awesome! Then this girl named Zoe (AKA- the class nerd), asked if she meant 1 side of the page or 2 sides. Monster Myer’s said 1 side but then she was all like, ‘Ohh, I’m gonna do 2 sides.’ Show off. 

A lot of things had happened that day, but what happened next made me soooo mad! You see, we always have a race and it was just for boys, I always run in the race thinking that I might win this time. I stood in line and did some warm ups, that was when Aiden and Lincoln came and stood on either side of me. Leslie, the new girl, took her place on the end of the line that's when Aiden told her she wasn’t allowed to but she didn’t care one bit. On your marks, get set, go! That’s when Lincoln pushed me back making me start after everyone else which gave them a head start. I wasn’t going to give up and I felt like I could win the race. I kept running and running. Before I knew it, I was in front of everyone and I was winning, there were only a couple of more steps until the finish line. I could actually win this race. Or not. Leslie, the new girl just made it and bet me to it. Making me come second. That was the worst thing that happened to me today, seriously. I would have rather jumped in a tub full of ice instead of having to come second. I was so happy and I was so close, but no. Leslie had to come and ruin everything. Lets see, yelled at because I was STINKY, getting squirted with water in the face, getting picked on by the school bully, having to write a long essay about my hobbies and getting beaten by a girl. Can things get any worse than that? Okay diary, that was my day today. What an awesome day I had. (NOT!) See you later diary, I might draw a bit to make me feel better. BYE!

1 comment:

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    Justice

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