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Thursday, May 5, 2016

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The  unusual closet#
It was a dangerous place at Fiji so most of the children had to go to Sydney without their parents. It was very sad but we had to go. I saw that Lauren came to a trip to see Jedi but too bad she couldn't stay there. Lucky for her she gets to stay with her for a long time and also me because we all had to go. All the children had to pack their suitcases and then go on the plane. It was really sad that the parents couldn't come.

It has been 10 years we have been at Sydney and now all of us are 19 years old and it felt like we were sisters because we spent a lot of time together.
By now we were taken away by a lady called Elizabeth, Madam Elizabeth.

One day when we were playing hide and seek, Parwin went to a room so she could hide in it and in that room there was a closet so she went to hide in there. Parwin kept on moving back but suddenly she came to a whole new place with snow everywhere. She was very confused and she was also scared because she thought that the door of the closet was shut so she went to have a look if it was open and it was so she quickly went out of it. She quickly went to find Lauren and Jedi so she could show her the closet. When she told them they didn't believe her so Parwin showed them that it was real.
When Lauren and  Jedi went in there and they gasped. They had  a little look around and they found three doors that had a sign which said…

¨pick a door then open it, you might find a genie which will give you three wishes each but if you get it wrong then you will die. We picked a door but it was wrong and it had fire in it somehow an invisible hand was pushing us into the fire which made us die. I woke up and then I realized that it was just a dream which was good.
So in my own time I really like writing stories and this is one of them. Hope you like it. : )

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